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Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the
last
 few decades, the planet experienced an intractable
problem
, today the environment still is an unsolved issue. People have very divided opinions about the care of society on
this
problem
. In
this
 essay, I will show the engagement of the new generation, despite is far to be considered solved. Due to the environmental
problem
, many youngsters in the
last
 decade focused their studies and developing cutting-edge technology able to approach the
problem
. Obviously, the end is far but the new generation’s commitment is remarkable and even increasing.
Moreover
, today the information allows us to be informed about the catastrophe consequences around the world, a dramatic situation that can be seen by everyone.In India,
for example
, the Government fronted an extreme situation, they were forced to live with a counted
liters
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 of water every day, people could live by using around 20
liters
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 to eat, drink and wash.
That is
 an example that could happen everywhere, and we have the evidence.
On the other hand
, a significant number of citizens do not provide to keep informed. Despite the various environmental issues documentary or tv programs people ignore completely and maintain old habits. Many prefer to take the car rather than the bike, or even do not close the water when is not necessary.
Furthermore
 is easy to think that everything is happening far from us. Generally, especially the youngsters could think that the actions on the planet do not have consequences because the melting ice,
for example
, is a catastrophe far from our country. In conclusion environmental issue is not quite easy to tackle. The new generation by developing new technology, adopting a green lifestyle has started the struggle. I strongly believe that the young people’s commitment shows the consideration that
this
problem
 has.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prioritize
  • immediate needs
  • connect with
  • distant
  • abstract
  • economic considerations
  • growing awareness
  • active participation
  • initiatives
  • movements
  • impacts
  • well-being
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