FOR SCHOOL CHILDREN THEIR TEACHERS HAVE MORE INFLUENCE ON THEIR INTELLIGENCE AND SOCIAL DEVELOPMENT THAN THEIR PARENTS. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

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Over the

last

two or three decades, children development have been developing more tremendously than ever before across the world.

However

school

infants are influenced in intelligence and

school

improvement by their mothers and fathers. I strongly agree with

this

statement and

this

essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. To commence with, an elementary level student can influence by their teacher

such

knowledgeable

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and development too because the professors have numerous knowledge which is academic wisdom to compared children's

parents

, so they can influence by their teaching skills.

For example

India

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Indian

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school

offsprings always like to become their

tutors

like wisdom, good quality and way of dressing style even their professions too.

Then

school

offsprings

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offspring

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can be influenced by their

tutors

' knowledge and teaching talent rather than their

parents

Furthermore

school

is the best place for infants can learn by their

tutors

and these educational

institutionals

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institutions

not only teaches education but

also

teaches good behaviour and morale to compared

parents

, so innumerable countries are followed the

school

education system rather than home-teaching.

For instance

, in Australia had stopped

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their home-schooling

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three decades before and now

practices

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practice

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school

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the school

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educational system for their infants' improvements.

Then

, the teacher can be taught effectively

with

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using their knowledge, experience and skill to teach their an elementary level student rather than a

child parent

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child-parent

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. To conclude, a

school

child can be influenced enormously by their

tutors

' wisdom, experience,teaching method, way of dressing style and communication rather than their

parents

Therefore

, I strongly agree with

this

statement in the above-mentioned details. I believe that that process is conducive to building an educational society.

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FOR SCHOOL CHILDREN THEIR TEACHERS HAVE MORE INFLUENCE ON THEIR INTELLIGENCE AND SOCIAL DEVELOPMENT THAN THEIR PARENTS. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

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