These days in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

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Nowadays, in many places of the world, people often choose to work as an IT employee or an engineer but not as a teacher, because of some problems.

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essay, will discuss the possible reasons and provide suitable solutions. To start with the reasons, there are two main factors which are concerned with ease and it should be highlighted.

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, the monthly salaries of the teacher are very poor which cannot meet their demand.

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, mocking the style of teaching, of the staff is common especially in secondary schools because of the rules which are implemented by the government.

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there are some rules for senior high students that a tutor should follow, like, they aren't allowed to beat the pupil, which gives leverage for the scholar to misbehave in the class.

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, most faculty members prefer to lecture for primary or higher secondary class

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, there are some solutions which can help the mentor to educate

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pupils by increasing their monthly wages,

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, persuading people to opt for teaching by showing off the benefits of becoming a pandit.

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, in the intermediate level very mocking is done often should be ironed out by executing strict regulations within the schools.

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, in ,India an intermediate class lecturer has the authority to punish the learners who are behaving improperly. In conclusion, as the communities opting as a pandit is dwelling,

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can be prevented by allowing extra benefits and

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by implementing strict

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in the schools

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These days in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many believe that being good at a sport is result of talent while others think that it comes from hard work. Discuss both views and give your reasons.

Nowadays, many people have easy access to computers and a large number of children play computer games.

Some employers want to be able to contact their staff all the time including holidays. Do you think the advantages of this are more than its disadvantages?

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?