you have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in that city . Write to your friend explaining what course you would like to apply and at which colleges. Tell him /her what type of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years and ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution.

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Dear John, Hi, hope you are in the best of health and spirits and Writing
this
piece of paper to seek your assistance in contacting a significant institution in your city. You will be glad to know that I have decided to enrol me in Master of
Business
Administration in Canada. For the
last
2 years, I have been working in a multinational company as a
Business
Analyst. As you are aware, I graduated in
Business
Administration from TIM
university
in India back in 2018.
Therefore
, I thought a master
business
degree would help in flourishing my future. I Have researched many possible options and shortlisted three schools. They are the
University
of Toronto, Saint Mary’s
University
and the
University
of Prince Edward Island. Since you are a born Canadian, there is no one who can guide you to select the best institution. Please suggest which one would be value for money and a quality school. At the same ,time you could
also
share your choice of schools other than these ones. Looking forward to hearing from you. Pay my regards to Uncle and aunt. Yours truly Ritu
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

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