Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In
this
world, there is an emerging
number
of
universities
opened up for
of
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students
to learn or get a degree, and
preparing
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for the upcoming future. Many male and female
students
take admission in different subjects every year. Unfortunately, in some countries, many
universities
have bounded criteria to register more
number of
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male
students
as compared to
females
. Due to the least availability of
seats
for female
students
, they are forced to leave
studies
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their studies
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which have become the cause of
illiteracy
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the illiteracy
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rate
to
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increase.
Similarly
, in Pakistan, more
seats
are available for males as compared to
females
both in public or private institutes.
For instance
, in the University of Lahore, the
number
of
seats
for male
students
is greater in
number
in Bachelors of Physics but the
number
of
seats
for
females
is greater than males in Bachelors of Architecture.
However
, it is an undeniable fact that less
number
of
females
decide to study in
universities
but
in addition
to it, they do not get admission in the field of their own choice because of
lack
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of
seats
for female
students
.
This
injustice
not
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only the cause of illiteracy increment but
also
urges the
females
to keep their values down. In Islam, it is clearly declared that there are equal rights for both men and women. Both are the creation of God Almighty. There is no Islamic law
which
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states that
females
are inferior to males by any aspect of life. Eventually, I will conclude from all discussion above that it must be equal opportunity for male and female
students
in all
universities
with an equal
number
of
seats
in every offered program as it is a right of women to choose field whatever they want. There should be no enforcement on
females
for limited fields of education.
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