An increasing number of couples have adopted a “chidless” lifestyle over the last decades. What do you think is causing this? What effects will this trend have on society?

Nowadays the world is changing rapidly, so
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society
which
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in it. Today people have more rights and can express them with freedom. In the past ten years, it was observed the origin of the new
chidless
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childless
lifestyle
adapted
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by
increasing
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an increasing
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number of
couples
. Some of the causes and effects of
this
trend will be analysed as follows.
Firstly
, different causes can be found when it comes to
this
trend. To start with, a major cause would be a modern and busy way of living. Life has become much more demanding than 20 years ago. Today, people not only have one degree
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but
also
a master degree. For
this
reason, some
couples
are focused on building their careers
instead
of creating families.
In addition
, many
couples
prefer to have more free time to
persue
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pursue
their dreams
such
as travelling or setting
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own business,
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all these activities will be difficult to run with children. In the consequence, all causes described above have positive and negative effects
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society
. To start with
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positive
ones,
couples
addapted
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adapted
added
a responsible vision of parenting, so if some
couples
consider that there no
wil
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will
be enough time and
attenttion
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attention
to rise
a children
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it is a respectful decision to consider that there no will be children raised in
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of lack of love and attention.
In other words
, new generations will be
raisen
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raised
risen
in healthy and stable families, with
copacities
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capacities
to provide all needed values to the child.
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the other hand, negative effects
also
should be considered. The
chidless
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childless
lifestyle could generate an
increasing
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old population which could drive to the blockage of progression of the
society
.
As a result
that could
be affect
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the economy and conditions of some countries. In conclusion, I consider that we should respect
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differents
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lifestyles of the
society
because of the free will that everyone has. But it
also
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worth noticing to say that the same
society
it
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is
also
responsible
of
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the future problems that
this
trend can cause.
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