An increasing number of couples have adopted a “chidless” lifestyle over the last decades. What do you think is causing this? What effects will this trend have on society?

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society

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in it. Today people have more rights and can express them with freedom. In the past ten years, it was observed the origin of the new

chidless

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childless

lifestyle

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increasing

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number of

couples

. Some of the causes and effects of

this

trend will be analysed as follows.

Firstly

, different causes can be found when it comes to

this

trend. To start with, a major cause would be a modern and busy way of living. Life has become much more demanding than 20 years ago. Today, people not only have one degree

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but

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a master degree. For

this

reason, some

couples

are focused on building their careers

instead

of creating families.

In addition

, many

couples

prefer to have more free time to

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pursue

their dreams

such

as travelling or setting

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own business,

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all these activities will be difficult to run with children. In the consequence, all causes described above have positive and negative effects

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society

. To start with

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positive

ones,

couples

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adapted

added

a responsible vision of parenting, so if some

couples

consider that there no

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be enough time and

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attention

to rise

a children

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it is a respectful decision to consider that there no will be children raised in

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of lack of love and attention.

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, new generations will be

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risen

in healthy and stable families, with

copacities

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capacities

to provide all needed values to the child.

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the other hand, negative effects

also

should be considered. The

chidless

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childless

lifestyle could generate an

increasing

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old population which could drive to the blockage of progression of the

society

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that could

be affect

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the economy and conditions of some countries. In conclusion, I consider that we should respect

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differents

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lifestyles of the

society

because of the free will that everyone has. But it

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worth noticing to say that the same

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also

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the future problems that

this

trend can cause.

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An increasing number of couples have adopted a “chidless” lifestyle over the last decades. What do you think is causing this? What effects will this trend have on society?

Your opinion

Nowadays, some parents pressure their children to be successful in a specific field. What are the reasons for this? Is it negative or positive?

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe that it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, more and more older people who need employment compete with the younger people for the same job. What problem this causes? What are solution?