In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. with increased use of computers, the internet and smart phones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advanatages of this developmen?

Technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds in many fields, especially in
work
culture.
As a result
, today's mankind
are
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started to
work
from
home
with computers, the internet and
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smartphones
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smart phones
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.
This
trend has benefits and drawbacks of that improvement and that essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. There are numerous benefits to that breakthrough. One of the main advantages is that congestion might be reduced due to mankind
works
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from
home
,
thus
, air pollution can be diminished too.
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, in the pandemic situation by the coronavirus, humankind has worked at their homes while air pollution and traffic were reduced significantly across the world. Another main advantage is that commuting
time
might be diminished, so people have to spend a quality of
time
with their family who
are
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working persons,
besides
they spend most of
time
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at office or workplace. These are the merits of that breakthrough of
work
culture. There are some drawbacks to
work
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from
home
. One of the major disadvantages is that
distrubance
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disturbance
of family things, children would be disturbed to their parents
work
meanwhile working,
consequently
, concentration might be
distrubed
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disturbed
and boredom will be increased. Another main disadvantage is
that
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increasing the
work
time
when they do
work
from
home
because the employer does not follow the proper and standard
time
like actual working schedule
instead
of whenever they have to need any details or information about
work related
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. If a person works in
work
from
home
, he will be worked extra hours rather than
actual
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the actual
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standard
time
.
For instance
, a recent report by the Times of India said that more than 60% of the Indians have suffered for extra working hours even mid-night
also
when
work
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from
home
. These are the demerits of that breakthrough. To conclude, when all things considered, these both have advantages and disadvantages, reducing pollution and traffic and increasing
time
with family is the benefits. Reducing concentrations and increasing
work
hours is the disadvantages.
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