Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things.other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both view and give your views

The advertising industry's business growing day by day on a very huge scale and focus on selling more
product
to customers.
However
many people think that it does not affect their buying choice. I agree with
this
statement
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some extent and
also
we can't ignore the power of
advertisement
. To embark on, in
this
modern era, many new startups are growing in huge number and
this
cause a high
amount
of competition between companies.
Next
to it,most of the modern companies take help from
advertising
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an advertising
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company
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companies
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to grow their business and want to cut the competition.
For instance
, one of the biggest
unicorn
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in India 'Flipkart' spent 5 million dollars on
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the ad
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ad
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and
also
made
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Kapoor their brand ambassador.
That is
why
,
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many
business
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used
huge
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a huge
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amount
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amounts
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of
money
to sell their
production
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by making appealing
brand
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brands
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in front of the public.
On the other hand
, many startups spent Apple
amount
of
money
on
advertisement
.
However
, their brand and
product
are not very valuable
for
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public
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. Sodhi West all their
money
on bad products which are not liked by
public
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the public
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.
As a result
,Dell lost their
company
and announced bankruptcy in front
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command and announce bankruptcy due to insufficient
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funds
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to run their
company
.
For example
, in India,the noise
company
phased huge loss in the financial year 2019, in spite of that,desh paint lot of
money
on
advertisement
seeking for profit.
In contrast
,
company
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went under huge debt and they sold their companies
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to
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the bank
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bank
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banks
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.
Thus
, it's clear think that if your
product
is
a
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not strong enough, no
amount
of
money
is helpful. To conclude,
advertisement
of
product
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is
a
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very necessary for growth purposes,but if your
product
key is not worthy for
public
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the public
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they surely ignore it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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