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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things.other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both view and give your views

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The advertising industry's business growing day by day on a very huge scale and focus on selling more
product
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 to customers.
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 many people think that it does not affect their buying choice. I agree with
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at
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 some extent and
also
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 we can't ignore the power of
advertisement
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. To embark on, in
this
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 modern era, many new startups are growing in huge number and
this
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 cause a high
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 of competition between companies.
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 to it,most of the modern companies take help from
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an advertising
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company
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companies
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 to grow their business and want to cut the competition.
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, one of the biggest
unicorn
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unicorns
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 in India 'Flipkart' spent 5 million dollars on
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the ad
an ad
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ad
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ads
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 and
also
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 made
kareena
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 Kapoor their brand ambassador.
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 why
,
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many
business
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businesses
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 used
huge
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a huge
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amount
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amounts
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 of
money
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 to sell their
production
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products
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 by making appealing
brand
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brands
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 in front of the public.
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, many startups spent Apple
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 of
money
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 on
advertisement
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.
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, their brand and
product
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 are not very valuable
for
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public
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the public
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. Sodhi West all their
money
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 on bad products which are not liked by
public
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the public
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.
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,Dell lost their
company
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 and announced bankruptcy in front
high
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of high
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 command and announce bankruptcy due to insufficient
fund
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funds
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 to run their
company
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.
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, in India,the noise
company
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 phased huge loss in the financial year 2019, in spite of that,desh paint lot of
money
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 on
advertisement
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 seeking for profit.
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,
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company
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the company
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 went under huge debt and they sold their companies
asset
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assets
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 to
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the bank
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bank
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banks
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.
Thus
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, it's clear think that if your
product
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 is
a
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not strong enough, no
amount
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 of
money
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 is helpful. To conclude,
advertisement
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 of
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product
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the product
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 is
a
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apply
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very necessary for growth purposes,but if your
product
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 key is not worthy for
public
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the public
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 they surely ignore it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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