Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others think that the circumstances of a crime, and the reason for committing it should be considered when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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system
for all types of Use synonyms
crimes
while others recon , the punishment should be varied according to the level and circumstance of the Use synonyms
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. Because there are many unfortunate reasons for most Use synonyms
crimes
and some Use synonyms
people
engage in Use synonyms
crimes
unintentionally , I believe , the Use synonyms
law
should be changed according to the level and circumstance of the Use synonyms
crime
.
On one hand , Citizens of a country follow the Use synonyms
law
of that country , as long as they trust the Use synonyms
justice
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system
. Unfortunately , most Use synonyms
people
around the globe engage with a Use synonyms
crime
when they are fed up with Use synonyms
justice
or when they are not aware of the Use synonyms
law
of that country . Use synonyms
For example
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people
who engage in Use synonyms
crimes
in their study were unaware of the Use synonyms
law
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this
reason , I believe we have to consider the level of Linking Words
crime
and the reason for doing it when we going to punish them.
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On the other hand
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people
are given the same punishment for each Use synonyms
crime
, there will be an injustice for all Use synonyms
people
of that society . Unfortunately , most criminals who engage with a mild degree of Use synonyms
crime
will suffer unnessoryly while sometimes, criminals who have done very serious Use synonyms
crimes
will get a very light punishment for their Use synonyms
crimes
. To illustrate Use synonyms
this
, a well known NGO recently stated , Linking Words
people
in many countries suffer unnessoryly due to the unbalanced low Use synonyms
system
that countries are practising. Use synonyms
therefore
I believe , a fixed low Linking Words
system
is a very unfair Use synonyms
system
.
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although
some Linking Words
people
believe there should be a fixed Use synonyms
law
to punish criminals who doing Use synonyms
crimes
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justice
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Furthermore
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system
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people
will suffer more and by customising it we can give Use synonyms
justice
to Use synonyms
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who engage with Use synonyms
crimes
without knowledge . Since these factors , Use synonyms
this
writer strongly believes the factor that the Linking Words
law
should be changed with each Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite