Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others think that the circumstances of a crime, and the reason for committing it should be considered when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some part of the community thinks , that there should be an unchanged low
system
for all types of crimes
while others recon , the punishment should be varied according to the level and circumstance of the crime
. Because there are many unfortunate reasons for most crimes
and some people
engage in crimes
unintentionally , I believe , the law
should be changed according to the level and circumstance of the crime
.
On one hand , Citizens of a country follow the law
of that country , as long as they trust the justice
system
. Unfortunately , most people
around the globe engage with a crime
when they are fed up with justice
or when they are not aware of the law
of that country . For example
, a recent survey done by the university of Colomba reveals , about 60% of people
who engage in crimes
in their study were unaware of the law
. For this
reason , I believe we have to consider the level of crime
and the reason for doing it when we going to punish them.
On the other hand
, When people
are given the same punishment for each crime
, there will be an injustice for all people
of that society . Unfortunately , most criminals who engage with a mild degree of crime
will suffer unnessoryly while sometimes, criminals who have done very serious crimes
will get a very light punishment for their crimes
. To illustrate this
, a well known NGO recently stated , people
in many countries suffer unnessoryly due to the unbalanced low system
that countries are practising. therefore
I believe , a fixed low system
is a very unfair system
.
In conclusion , although
some people
believe there should be a fixed law
to punish criminals who doing crimes
, another part opines changing the justice
according to the type and reason for crimes
. Furthermore
, with a fixed low system
, people
will suffer more and by customising it we can give justice
to people
who engage with crimes
without knowledge . Since these factors , this
writer strongly believes the factor that the law
should be changed with each crime
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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