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a few people clinch that the newspapers are the most beneficial source for learning and getting information; however, opponents think that internet is a better media. discuss both views

#people #newspapers #source #information #opponents #internet #media
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Information
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 will benefit
people
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 who need it the most. Some
people
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 seek it in
newspapers
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 at local stores or stations, the others find it easier getting it from the
Internet
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.
This
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 essay will explain both views.
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 of all,
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 available in
newspapers
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 usually consist of Jobs offers, Daily headlines, Stocks markets and some crime
news
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.
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, For some
people
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,
newspapers
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 are preferable because it is easier to get and easier to read. All they need are
take
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 it from stations, open it and read it. Another reason is, Informations in
newspapers
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 usually valid and hoax-free.
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, New York Times mention the recent political issues in their latest edition, most
people
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 tend to believe that
information
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 because it is impossible to change the words that are already written on the papers.
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, even in the era of
digitalizations
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digitalization
,
newspapers
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 still running their business.
However
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,
internet
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media
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 provide large scales of
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.
Firstly
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, The readers can get various types of
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, from top-level
media
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 with reputable integrity to non-valid and hoax
news
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.
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, the spreading of the
news
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 on the
internet
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 is definitely faster than print
media
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.
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, online
media
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 writes
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information
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 related to a tsunami disaster that occurs on Borneo island. Within minutes, nearly all Indonesian citizens read about it and understand what is really going on. The result is, donations coming from Indonesian citizens coming into the disaster location. In conclusion, Both
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 have their own unique benefits. Even though the newspaper is reliable but
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media
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 is faster than print
media
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. To make it efficient, citizens should choose the correct
media
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 based on their needs.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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