Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it’s wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

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There has been a lot of debates over the years around the said topic. Many have argued both the points, especially that the marriage is a mere bond between two individuals to share the living expenses while others have opined to the contrary. Here, in

this

essay, I will discuss my opinion regarding both of these statements.

Firstly

, many people believe that marriage is something which is proposed in Heaven and fulfilled by humans.

However

, I say

otherwise

. Various nations have various cultural differences in the wedding aspects. For some, the alliances are brought in by their parents and is arranged, while others choose their own life partner out of pure affection. I take the latter's side. I believe in love marriages, which lasts much longer and stay divine.

For example

, many of my friends who are married through love are happier even after decades.

On the other hand

, some choose their better half on the aspects of their wealth and earnings. I have seen so many celebrities who have been through

this

bond and suffered a lot due to mere misunderstanding in their day to day life. I strongly believe all

this

fondness would

last

till the money bag is full. As soon as it empties up, so does their "love". Many

such

marriages end up in divorce, which results in depression and despair for both families. To sum it up, even though there are people who do get married for status and money, I take the side of true devotion. Marriage out of emotion has more understanding compared to the other.

This

helps lead a better life and a happy family.

Moreover

, a human emotion stands above a mere paper.

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