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every year several languages die out .some people think that is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. ti what extent do you agree or dissagree with this opinion?

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Languages
 are one of the main creations made by man, which is essential for
communication
 with each other. Unfortunately, some of them are facing the danger of extinction annually .
However
 , part of the community opines
this
 as a good trend since
this
 will lead to an easy lifestyle. With the usage of a few global
languages
 ,
communication
 between the different nations has improved dramatically. At the same ,time
this
 will be very
cost
-effective . Since
then
 , I have strongly agreed with the given notion .
To begin
 with, when we consider the evolution of
languages
 ,there were a plethora of
languages
 in the past due to the limitation of travel. In fact in the ,past they used
languages
 only for
communication
 within a small group.With the development of technology ,
people
 started to travel around the world and they needed to communicate with other Nations. Fortunately , in the current ,era
people
 around the globe travel and communicate with each other more frequently and they need a global language for
this
, rather than local
languages
 .
For instance
 , a study done at the University of Colombo has found , there will be high demand in the future for students who know international
languages
 than local
languages
 . At the same time , when we use a few
languages
 for global
communication
, It will significantly cut the
cost
 for
communication
 . In the past , when
people
 were using several
languages
 , there were many translators for help . Apart from that , there were leaflets , posters , newspapers ,and TV ,Radio channels in different
languages
 . By the way , if you have few or one common language , the
cost
 will be very low .
For example
 , a leading survey institute in India has suggested using the English language for all
communication
 requirements to cut down the
cost
 of
communication
 . In conclusion ,
people
 around the globe Use few
languages
 to communicate than fast and
this
 led to the extinction of some of the local
languages
 . By the way , some believe
this
 is a positive trend since
this
 will reduce the
cost
 of
communication
 and improve
communication
 with other nations . Since
then
 ,
this
 writer is in complete agreement with the notion that has been given.
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