You live in an area where the local council has made some changes to regulations. You believe these changes are not good for residents. Write a letter to a councillor. In your letter: Introduce yourself. Describe the problem. Say what you think the council should do about the situation.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

missive in regard to the recent changes that have been made in the timing slot of the area.I live on the

third

floor in the Saraswati Apartment with my family and I am living in

this

society for the past 6 years. Let me explain the situation,I work in Tata Consultancy Service as a Marketing Manager and my job ends at 10:00 pm and after that,it took me around 1 hour to reach my dwelling.

However

,by implementing the new regulations that state that main gates will be closed after 9:30pm because of rising robbery concers in the region.It would be laborious for me to reach at my home. I would be very grateful to you,if you would install more CCTV's camera in the area so to prevent the uncertainities.

Furthermore

,if possible please hire atleast two security guards to ensure the safety of the area. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Haman

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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159 words

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