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Some people think that educated people are more valuable than people who have learned skills through experience. Do you think that educated people are the most valuable for society? What kinds of skills can people learn through experience that can benefit society?

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 are contributing more to the nation than skilled people, who gained knowledge through experience. In my view,
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 crowd can bring a lot of positive impacts and results to the surroundings. There are numerous opportunities, which can be converted
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 worth experience for the uneducated Pupil.
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 through experts. Obviously, the knowledgeable public is the vital source to grow the industries, businesses, software technologies with their talent.
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, intelligent competitors can execute the companies projects to the productive results and feedback. Eventually, it helps to develop the market scenario and
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 country's economy. Graduate trained and certified student's get
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 priority to appear on the tests due to criteria.
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population
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 with sound characteristics,
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 to the potential jobs and opportunities because of no or poor academic record. I believe, intellectual folk can create
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 lifestyle, can boost financial Planning’s and spreading the motivating energy to the community.
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 mostly computer technology has been contributing by highly certified or IT persons to the beginners. Basic computers skills would surely explore the job for those learners. Fields
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 short term basis and implement them into the earnings by various functions. I admit if the authorities promote to enhance the competency of persons based on the professionalism, it would influence to reduce crimes, unemployment ,poverty. Poor background families will get motivated and inspire the children's to accomplish the dreams and goals. In conclusion,
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 informative generation is precious for the country, as they are the future of the society.
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, knowledge sharing must-do for the adding Capabilities to the youngsters.
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society to create equality in human beings.
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