The number of older people is increasing. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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there is an increase in the percentages of the old generation of society in comparison with the past.

This

phenomenon has its own two sides. A great number of advantages and disadvantages are being argued by experts. I will discuss two benefits and two drawbacks of the high

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of

elderlies

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in

this

essay. On one hand, seniors are the part of society that

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undoubtedly brought their

communites

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communities

considerable advantages.

First

, their experiences have

alwayes

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always

been viewed as the most valuable

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advice

advices

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that has guided

young

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generation to succeed.

Subsequently

, they can transfer

this

knowledge to more people as they live longer.

Second

, they are the most essential members of a large family who have the ability to gather the family members.

For instance

, gathering at the

grandparents

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grandparent's

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house for

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thanksgiving can result in a bigger companionship rather than spending time in our parents' house.

On the other hand

, prolonging

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life had always been viewed as a goal for scientists but recently people are taking a fresh look at it.

Although

living longer might be preferable to dying soon, it suffers from the disadvantages that cause various difficulties for us. The most obvious

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negative

aspect of being old is experiencing more ailments.

For example

, more heart disease ensues as humans get older.

Consequently

, it deduces a higher

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burden

on the health care system.

Moreover

, older folks need not only more medical attention but

also

more financial

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.

Hence

they are not able to work as they used to do during their productive years, government as the most responsible authority has the duty to take care of them which needs an extravagant budget. To sum up, the old generation's percentage is growing around the world.

Although

there are a lot of advantages like providing valuable experiences and

strenghtening

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strengthening

the families, it might increase the

inquairy

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inquiry

inequality

of health care facilities and financial supports.