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Today more and more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the travellers?

#people #case #travellers
Due to recent
advancement
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 in our transportation industry, the advantages of being mobile
are became
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 significantly high. In
this
 contemporary era,
people
, not only wants to explore their own country but
also
 the entire world. In
this
 essay, I will discuss the main reason
of
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increase
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 in
travel
 with examples and benefits for the
tralvel
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travel
.
Firstly
, it is important to understand that, why do
people
wants
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 to
travel
 more? I think, due to recent developments, travelling to distant
location
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locations
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 became more affordable, available and safe. In past,
people
 used to
travel
 by ships and by road. Even roads were not properly constructed. Affordable air
trasport
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transport
 changed the game.
For example
: A lot of
muslim
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people
 used to go to Haj by ship, it took months of time just to reach the destination. Now, it is completely changed and by plane, the entire journey only
take
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 4 hours. Development and construction of new highways
also
 made
travel
 easy.
Secondly
, I want to highlight
benefits
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the benefits
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 of
these
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this
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travel
. Many countries are only dependent on tourism. It is
aslo
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also
 benefiting
to
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the local population by generating new jobs. Travellers
also
 enjoy and experience different cultures and food. Travellers
taker
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take
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 many good memories with them while being
on
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in
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differnet
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different
location
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locations
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. To sum up, travelling is benefiting many
people
 and adding
values
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value
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 to human
existance
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existence
. Only
few
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 things should be taken care
while
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of while
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 travelling and we are all set.
People
 should not
distrurb
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disturb
 and spoil natural
habitates
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habitats
 and
also
 think of
emission
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emissions
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 they make during
travel
. The balance is most important in
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everything
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every thing
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, I must say finding that balance is not
to
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too
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 much difficult.
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