Teenagers face many problems in school and at home. What is the cause of this? How can parents solve this problem?

Parents
return
home
from vacation, leaving their teenage son to look after the house. They soon realize that while they were gone, he threw a big party. Beginning: Arriving
home
, they saw the son, his friends and 2 policemen. When the
parents
were not at
home
, the son had a big party. He invited all his friends because he has a huge house. There was loud music at the party And they made a lot of noise. days. They worried the
neighbors
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very much. Due to the fact that they did not calm down, the
neighbors
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decided to call the police. When the police arrived, they saw that they
all
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drank alcohol and asked for their ID. Since they did not know what they were doing, they gave all the documents. they check and understand that they are all minors and at
home
without
parents
. That's when his
parents
come, and the police write a protocol to them and want to take away their parental rights. Because they left a minor at one house unattended. But the
parents
turned out to be policemen too, but from another district and adults solved the problem and promised colleagues that
this
would not happen again.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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