Education is the single most important factor for a developing country. Do you agree or disagree

Some experts claim that

education

is the only vital

criteria

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for developing

countries

' success.

However

, I disagree with

this

statement given the importance of some other matters.

This

essay will explain the reasons behind my opinion. The state of freedom and democracy, primarily, is essential in order to consider a developing

country

is on the right track. Many of these

countries

may be able to offer their citizens

high quality

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education

opportunities,

such

as Iran,

however

,

education

itself is simply not enough to reach higher standards in Iranian citizens' daily lives. Even though their students may be able to achieve higher scores

in

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average, lack of freedoms often

cause

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many of these students to suffer from

authocracy

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autocracy

. Developing

countries

,

therefore

, should keep in mind that democracy and tolerance

is

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critical as

education

on their journey to

finally

become a developed

country

. Another equally important factor is having a strong economy,

in other words

, being able to balance import and export, keep the inflation rate low and employment rate up while increasing the production quality and quantity. South Korea,

for example

, have not only invested in

education

during

1980s

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' but

also

planned and started to execute a long-term financial development policy.

Consequently

, South Korea is now considered one of the most developed

countries

in terms of

education

, economy and democracy. The secret of their success,

nevertheless

, was a well-planned state policy to sustainably develop the economical conditions. In conclusion,

although

education

might be one of the most essential matters in terms of a

country

's

state

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stage

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of development, different examples around the world have shown us it is not the only matter. A developed

country

, in my opinion, is

the

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one that

able

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to offer its well-educated citizens better financial conditions and

ability

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the ability

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to raise their voice without being charged.