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the alteration of the public library now and how it will look after development.

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The given maps illustrate the alteration of the public
library
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 now and how it will look after development. The general overview here is that the
library
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 will extend to the east, roughly doubling its original size to allow for the addition of extra facilities. According to the maps,it can be seen that the entrance is located in front of the
library
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,with situated on the right corner of it is a
shield
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 of
kid’s
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books
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. The seating is on the centre,with there was the
shield
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 of another
kid’s
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books
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 and mystery
books
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 on the east side,while to the west stood a Romantic
books
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 and thriller
books
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shield
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. On the back, there was the male and female restroom in the left corner,
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 to it situated the fantasy
books
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shield
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. After the development, the
library
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 will extend to the east,with there will be a new entrance into the
kid’s
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 zone where the
kid’s
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books
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shield
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 will be moved,and additional seating will be added. the staff room will be built to the north side of the room,which construction of their own entrance.
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,the computer room will locate to the south of the
kid’s
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area
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.
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, the existing
library
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 space will be the main
area
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 and will be narrower due to the construction of an internal wall from the north to the south. The male and female restroom, Romance book
shield
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 and thriller
books
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shield
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 will all remain unchanged within
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area
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,whereas the fantasy
books
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shield
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 and seating
area
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 will relocate closer to the west side of the building.

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