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Today, TV channels broadcast men’s sports shows more than women’s sport shows. Why is this the case? Should TV channels give equal showtime for each?

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Sport
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 is a common subject that draw people together, it is embraced within many cultures.
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,
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 that we see on TV are often showing more men’s games than women’s.
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 is because, there are more male counterpart in the
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 industry than there are female. I believe womenwomen could be given more screentime to promote balance in the industry. Through out history
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 has been dominated by men because there are simply more men players in most sports,
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 why we see more matches beween them. They are present in every sort of competitions, even in femenine sports like: ballet, gynastic and ice skating. On the otherhand, we often don’t see as many women in sports
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 as: kickboxing, soccers, or mountain climbing.
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, in my family, I usually see my dad and brother more excited for
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 than me and my mom. It would deffenitely interesting to see more female in the
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 scene. The TV channels can broadcast more matches between women
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 to their male counterpart’s matches.
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 increase in airtime for female to represent
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 along with male could have a meaningful message to the viewers and encourage more girls and ladies to join
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 acitivities. Despite
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 are seen to be more associated with male because they outnumber their counterpart. I believe by giving female players equal screentime, we could make
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 more popular among female audience and create a more balance pool of players base on gender.
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