The TV and the internet provide opportunity to ordinary people to become famous. Is this a positive or a negative development?
Nowadays, any person can become a celebrity easily because television programmes and social media platforms give that opportunity to them.
On the one hand, these opportunities are good because in past times that was not too easy like that. To become famous you need to be skilled and you must know the true person who will become your manager and help you to get fame. Frankly,
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, in recent years, you can easily become an actor or an actress. It does not matter anymore you are skilled or not. If you have enough followers on your social media nor you are skilled nor not you can be a singer or an actor or any other celebrity. If you are skilled and try to become somewhere in the art area of course social media will help you. Linking Words
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, you can easily have too many followers just doing dumb things or just making dark comedy without any skills. Maybe the new generation loves Linking Words
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To conclude for all of that, in my opinion, perhaps that opportunities have some positive sides but negative sides bigger than positive ones. So, it is completely a negative development and we are missing past times.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite