You recently stayed in a hotel on a business trip. You later discovered that you had left somethings behind at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In you letter - Give details of your stay at the hotel - Describe the things you left - Say what you want the manager to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter about items that I left in my room during my business trip at your hotel from the 1st to the 2nd of Feb 2022. I was attending a conference by the Construction Association, a 2-day event at your hotel. I

also

stayed on the 7th floor in room number 71. While I am staying in the room, I remember leaving my pen and a book on cricket by Kapil Dev in the bedside drawer. It is a big book with pictures of cricket players. The size is about 10 inches by 12 inches and looks like

magazine

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. The pen is a regular pen but it has my

initial

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“SS” on it. Kindly check in the lost and found and hold it for me. I will be back

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Toronto

week and I will come to collect it myself. Please call me to confirm that it is safe with you on 5556742020 and I am waiting for your call. Thanking you. Yours sincerely, Sukhwinder Singh

Submitted by Toni R on Thu Feb 17 2022

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

174 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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