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Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefit that it will replace face - to - face education. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both view and give your opinion

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Online
education
 is becoming a popular
mode
 of
education
 for almost every individual and on the flip side of the coin it
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has its own flaws as well. For
me
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 I would support
the
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online
education
 as in
exprience
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experience
 the online
mode
 has various advantages when compared to the offline
mode
. Online
education
 or E-learning is advantageous as it is bringing the knowledge to the remote areas which in
the
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traditional
education
 was not possible as it required a lot of investment for the individuals as they had to not only pay for the tuition fees but
also
 had to pay for the other expenses which included the living expense, food expense, etc which somehow to use to increase the overall investment for one's
education
. Whereas now with
the
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E-Learning the only expense that a
student
 has to manage is the tuition fees and pay for good internet bandwidth. Now if we see
this
 from the organisational point of view any educational organisation has to invest less in the infrastructure which was usually very high for traditional
education
 as it includes tons of amenities which is expected to be provided by the educational institution
such
 as classroom, practical labs etc.
Furthermore
, if we look that at the cons of E-Learning or online
education
, one of it can be that the interaction between the
student
 and the teacher becomes less, which in turn makes the doubt clearing part a little difficult and
secondly
 the
student
 who
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 in colleges or even in high school are more mature to worry about their future but the students who belong to the age group of below 14 do not have the sense of maturity towards their career which in turns makes these
student
 loose focus and decreases the base knowledge of these students which usually shunts their development and in turns makes it harder for them when they are promoted to a higher class. ,
Moreover
 online
education
also
 affects the parent whose child is below 12 years old as they have
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sit
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 with the
student
 the whole time so that the
student
 doesn't lose their focus and does not miss out on his/her
education
. So in conclusion, we can say that any
mode
 of
education
 has two sides just like a coin,
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 own positive and negative. We can just make sure that we can make the most positive points from the discussion and try to make
education
 much more efficient so that it becomes beneficial for almost everyone, as
this
 is the only way to make the world better.
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