Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefit that it will replace face - to - face education. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both view and give your opinion

Online
education
is becoming a popular
mode
of
education
for almost every individual and on the flip side of the coin it
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has its own flaws as well. For
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I would support
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online
education
as in
exprience
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experience
the online
mode
has various advantages when compared to the offline
mode
. Online
education
or E-learning is advantageous as it is bringing the knowledge to the remote areas which in
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traditional
education
was not possible as it required a lot of investment for the individuals as they had to not only pay for the tuition fees but
also
had to pay for the other expenses which included the living expense, food expense, etc which somehow to use to increase the overall investment for one's
education
. Whereas now with
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E-Learning the only expense that a
student
has to manage is the tuition fees and pay for good internet bandwidth. Now if we see
this
from the organisational point of view any educational organisation has to invest less in the infrastructure which was usually very high for traditional
education
as it includes tons of amenities which is expected to be provided by the educational institution
such
as classroom, practical labs etc.
Furthermore
, if we look that at the cons of E-Learning or online
education
, one of it can be that the interaction between the
student
and the teacher becomes less, which in turn makes the doubt clearing part a little difficult and
secondly
the
student
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in colleges or even in high school are more mature to worry about their future but the students who belong to the age group of below 14 do not have the sense of maturity towards their career which in turns makes these
student
loose focus and decreases the base knowledge of these students which usually shunts their development and in turns makes it harder for them when they are promoted to a higher class. ,
Moreover
online
education
also
affects the parent whose child is below 12 years old as they have
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with the
student
the whole time so that the
student
doesn't lose their focus and does not miss out on his/her
education
. So in conclusion, we can say that any
mode
of
education
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own positive and negative. We can just make sure that we can make the most positive points from the discussion and try to make
education
much more efficient so that it becomes beneficial for almost everyone, as
this
is the only way to make the world better.
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