Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affects them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays,
children
are becoming more independent on
themselves.The debated view focuses on allowing Change preposition
of
children
to make choice in every basic activities
which lead to only thinking for themselves rather than for their family Change to a singular noun
activity
where in
one support others ponder that overcoming the situation which Correct your spelling
wherein
are affects
them.I believe Change the verb form
are affecting
former
view has Correct article usage
the former
more
favourable side both aspects along with my point of view are explained in the following paragraph.
To embark with,there are certain reasons why Correct article usage
a more
children
are making their own decisions
.First
and foremost,many children
are influenced by trends and social life
.For example
,by seeing activities on the
social media they Correct article usage
apply
also
want to become independent to make decisions
.Therefore
,to the
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apply
some
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same
extent
it is useful and it makes Add a comma
,extent
parents
work effortless and living
without any types of worries.Wrong verb form
live
Moreover
,children
do not have any kind of burned
on their Replace the word
burn
head
.Eventually,they make Fix the agreement mistake
heads
decisions
effectively without anyone’s help.For instance
,50% of the children
choose their clothes,food without support
of their Add an article
the support
parents
so,it will be very helpful for their future life
.
On the contrary
, there are two sides to a coin. Firstly
, if children
make decisions
about what they are facing so it will enhance their decision making
skills. Add a hyphen
decision-making
Secondly
, at early age
children
can developed
skills. Change the verb form
develop
Although
, at early
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an early
age
they have Add a comma
,age
capabilities
to learn, how to solve Correct article usage
the capabilities
the
critical situation. Correct article usage
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However
, by doing this
children
can improvise their thinking power. Lastly
, it will be very beneficial for the situations
. Fix the agreement mistake
situation
However
, by doing this
children
can improvise their thinking power. Lastly
, it will be very beneficial for the children
to learn how to tackle the situation. So that, at the age
of 25 to 30 they will not find any difficulty to make decisions
about their life
. To exemplify, according to one research if children
have enough knowledge then
they will make right
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the right
decisions
for their life
.
In my opinion, parents
should allow children
to make small
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a small
decision
like choosing clothes, Fix the agreement mistake
decisions
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the decision
decision
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deciding
of
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on
career
. Correct article usage
a career
This
will improve strength
and capability of Correct article usage
the strength
children
at very
early Add an article
a very
age
. So, give them at very
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every
age
. So, give them a chance to do by
themselves.
To conclude,Correct pronoun usage
it by
this
essay has been explored from the sides with enough evidence which finally
allows me to pen down and state that parents
should be allowed to make decisions
to
their Change preposition
for
children
and think for long term benefits.Submitted by rohitgohel2658 on
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