You are currently taking a course at a university but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the university of Dean. In the letter: •Give details of your course •Explain why you need a week off •Say what you want the Dean to do

Dear Dean, I hope
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letter finds you well. I am writing
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letter to request a one-week break from the university during the course. I am Sam, a student of York University. I am a second-year Post-graduate student of BMAT. My student ID is SA 467890321.
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semester lasts 8 weeks, and is taught by Professor Mr Perkins. I am attending classes from 8 am to 2 pm on weekdays. I need a week off because my aunt slipped on the stairs. She is in the hospital now. I have to take care of her for almost a week. Her leg is almost fractured, and the doctor advised her to rest for three to four days.
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why I have to provide her
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medication and manage the household chores. I kindly request
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that you
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to
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grant me leave for
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urgency.
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, I want you to give me access to attempt any test or assignment which I will miss during that period. I want you to allow me to make up for missed work as well. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon! Yours sincerely, Sam.

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task response
Your goal is clear. The letter asks for a leave and says you may miss work. Add the exact dates of the leave and the days you will miss to be sure.
coherence cohesion
Break the text into clear blocks. Start with the purpose, then give details about the course, then the request and how you will make up work. Use one idea per paragraph.
tone
Polite tone and respectful close.
content
Gives clear reason for leave and asks to make up work.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dear
  • Dean
  • I am writing to
  • request
  • leave of absence
  • one week
  • course
  • name of course
  • year
  • semester
  • module
  • lectures
  • tutorials
  • labs
  • timing
  • absent
  • make up work
  • catch up
  • notes
  • readings
  • deadline
  • assignment
  • permission
  • please
  • could you
  • would you
  • appreciate
  • grateful
  • sign
  • official
  • document
  • record
  • form
  • arrange
  • contact
  • follow up
  • thank you
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