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Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in life. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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• In my opinion, these days it is a common problem. A lot of
people
 think, what age the best
for
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get
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 married and to have
children
. More
people
 prefer to have
children
 later. I think it is wrong
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 because it
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maybe
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 a little bad for the future. If you get married late you will have
children
 late too.
Then
 you must raise your
children
, must give them money. And your
children
 grow day by day, and when they achieve to age
adolescense
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adolescence
 their characters begin to change, and they maybe do not respect their
parents
. But at that moment
parents
 can not speak them because
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parents
 will already become old.
On the other hand
 to have
children
 later and to get married
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maybe
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 good. A lot of
people
 prefer to earn
much
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money for their future at
first
 and
then
 to get married and to have
children
. The
people
 who already got married but do not want to have a child,
they
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think that they
young
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 yet
for
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to be a dad or mom. In my view
to have
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 a
child
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,child
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 it is the biggest happiness in the world. But young families
,
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 should choose the age
by
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 their own
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 when they want
parents
. Usually, the
people
 who live in
europe
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 and
United
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the United
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 States of America prefer to have
children
 later. Muslims prefer to have
children
 a little earlier In the final analysis, from the point of view, the advantages of
this
 trend do not outweigh the disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prioritization
  • financial stability
  • educational prospects
  • personal development
  • health advancements
  • fertility options
  • economic uncertainties
  • parenthood
  • societal norms
  • life experience
  • generational gap
  • upbringing
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