With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in number of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Recently, the debate on whether society will be able to deal with the rise of elderly people today has been heated. As far as I am concerned, taking care of the elderly may not be a burden for society because of the
development
in technology. Use synonyms
Therefore
, the government should focus more on technological enhancement in order to deal with the ageing issue.
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To begin
with, the Linking Words
development
in technology allows hospitals to provide services more efficiently. As Use synonyms
doctors
can have easier access to patients’ medical history, the time spent asking questions can be saved. Use synonyms
For example
, Linking Words
doctors
will know what medicines the elderly use to take before with the help of the latest Use synonyms
system
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, Linking Words
doctors
may be able to cope with more patients within the same time.
In order to prevent the ageing population become a burden in the medical Use synonyms
system
, the government should have more subsidize related technological Use synonyms
development
. As many nurses will be needed for certain therapy, developing alternative machines seems to be a feasible way to increase the labour supply. Use synonyms
For example
, the elderly may do some exercise with certain facilities Linking Words
instead
of the nurses. In Linking Words
this
way, health care centres will be more able to receive more elderly patients.
In conclusion, since asking about old people’s medical history may be time-consuming for Linking Words
doctors
, the Use synonyms
development
in the medical Use synonyms
system
can save time and allow more elderly to care. Government should Use synonyms
also
focus more on health-related facilities for the elderly in order to ensure the labour supply in the medical Linking Words
system
.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite