Everybody should be allowed admission to university study programs regardless of their level of academic ability. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there is
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high competition for enrolment in
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universities. Some people think that students can get admission
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higher institutions without any intellectual capability. I partially agree with
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from the
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is important for the
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career. Some learners are good in
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particular
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skills, they cannot get good grades in
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examinations in schools or colleges that effects on their academic.
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in getting admission
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institutes. To
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my viewpoint, many students are great in
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field,
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • academic ability
  • admission criteria
  • equal opportunities
  • higher education
  • institutional resources
  • merit-based
  • qualification devaluation
  • under-qualification
  • vocational training
  • inclusive education
  • diversity in academia
  • competitive edge
  • global economy
  • academic standards
  • universal access
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