Some people think watching TV is bad for children, while other think that watching TV has more beneficial effects on children. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Everything has two sides. In terms of watching
tv
, some believe that it has a good effect on
kids
. But,
on the other hand
, many believe that
this
will generate
bad
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for
children
. For people that think
tv
will bring beneficial effects for
children
, they might be thinking that
tv
shows will give
wider
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range of information for
kids
.
For
example
, the child that used to watch documentary movies will have more information rather than the one who does not.
Furthermore
, through their favourite
tv
shows
kids
will find that process of learning more enjoyable and fun. Nowadays, the
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has become borderless. It is mean that various information from all over the world is accessible for everyone. Netflix,
for
example
, gives particular
tv
shows in
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differents
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languages for
kids
in
the
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other countries.
This
will trigger
kids
to learn languages in the most enjoyable way.
In contrast
, for the others who believe that
tv
shows will bring
worse
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impact
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their
children
, they were worried that
children
have tendencious to copy all things that they have seen on
tv
.
This
condition will create a big problem in society.
For
example
,
kids
who used to see action movies are more likely to act violently to their friends or their adults. another
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, recently there are more youths who smoke since
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early
age
.
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conditions were
also
believed caused by watching inappropriate
tv
shows for their
age
. On top of that, people have much less time to assist their
children
in watching
tv
shows. These conditions are caused by many factors, one of these factors is more pressure in work which will lead people to easier their supervision to their
kids
. in another case the parents will let their heir watch
tv
shows as they want, in order to make them calm. To sum up, in my opinion,
tv
shows will have a beneficial impact on
kids
as long as they are accompanied by their parents.
Thus
, the parent can select appropriate
tv
shows that inlined with their kid's
age
. Another method is involving AI programs on their
tv
, so the
tv
show will get filtered based on the
age
of their
kids
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary behavior
  • unrealistic perceptions
  • creative pursuits
  • social development
  • emotional development
  • constructive content
  • screen time
  • parental guidance
  • critical thinking
  • active learning
  • age-appropriate
  • media literacy
  • family bonding
  • moderation
  • perceive
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