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Band 5

Nowadays , anyone can post information on the internet ,even if it is incorrect . As a result , mostly the information we read os inccurate . What extent do you agree or disagree?

Internet
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people
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 to express one knowledge. Some
people
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internet
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the internet
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 is mostly given
in correct
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incorrect
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information
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.
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, I
am not completely agree
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do not completely agree
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 about it. My inclinations are justified in
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 paragraph. There are some positive points about posting
information
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internet
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the internet
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. And the main reason is that as we live in
modern
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the modern
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 world because of the
technoolgocal
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technological
 advancement so we need any detail about
any one
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anyone
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 any place and any types of
information
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 that we do not know. In
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, someone planning to travel
any
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 place that they do not know about their culture ,atmosphere and how to understand the
people
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 language and
also
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cost
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the cost
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 of the hotel that they
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dwall
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will
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only
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 solution to
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 many education
industry
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industries
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 are provided
online
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an online
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class
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classes
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 of their course on the net. It helps some
people
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 that they do not afford the cost of their education fee and
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 faculty fee.
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, there are some negative points about
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 provided
some
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and
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useful
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 about their products.
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survey
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a survey
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 shows the given data about
webpage
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the webpage
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 , one 's of the famous cosmetic company found to be
inanthentic
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inauthentic
 , to promote the sale of their product.
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Moreover
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people
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 using the
internet
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 to becoming
becoming
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popular and posting their detail about them
that is
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 not correct. In conclusion, some
people
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 post the
information
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 on
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internet
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 about they do not know that correct or not someone's do not know who is
anthenticity
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authenticity
.
Internet
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 shows
fact
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facts
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 as well as
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in correct
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incorrect
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information
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