Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is a common belief that many
goverments
think that Correct your spelling
governments
roads
are more important than railways
in their country. Howevere
, there is a more persuasive Correct your spelling
However
arguments
that developing Correct the article-noun agreement
argument
railways
is more helpful than improving roads
.
On the one hand, most of Add an article
the house
house
have their own car so many Fix the agreement mistake
houses
people
want to various roadways,
If there are not come up with traffic jam. Remove the comma
apply
Moreover
, If roads
are improved, a lots
of transport and travel businesses are able to develop because cars can go Correct the article-noun agreement
a lot
lots
to
everywhere Change preposition
apply
such
as top or mountin
, rural and isolated Correct your spelling
mountain
mounting
location
. Fix the agreement mistake
locations
For example
, products are able to deliver many places then
the customers who use the company are increasing more and more. Plus, people
can visit and experience other place
so it will Change the wording
another place
other places
linked
to Change the verb form
be linked
development
of tourism.
Add an article
the development
Nevertheless
, developing railways
is more effective than roads
. Although
home
has their own car, it is true that many Add an article
the home
people
who do not have Correct article usage
a drive
drive
license or something uncomfortable in their body use Replace the word
drivers
to
transportation Change preposition
apply
what
have to need rails Correct word choice
that
also
they
have to. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Furthermore
, If railways
are improved, many jobs that related with will be formed. For instance
, there are some people
need who have the ability to build rails and when it end
up there Change the verb form
ends
are
someone Change the verb form
is
have
to need who should take care of Correct pronoun usage
who have
this
. The corporations that operate the transportaions
Correct your spelling
transportation
transportations
also
need.
To sum up, while there are some adventages
that developing Correct your spelling
advantages
roads
. On the other hand
, It is evident that improving railways
is more prominent in country
.Add an article
the country
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