Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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administration

that economic action is their vital aim,

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others think that

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factors are more essential for

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country

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. IN my opinion,

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agree with

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statement that lack of the only economical factors for

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development

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country

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.

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the one hand,

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country

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the country

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with

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others

and to get conclude that if which state had more financial income

then

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those county

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more

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developed

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firstly

the conditions set aside for the

people

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by the state are very

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important

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.

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as Chine

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republic

,there you can see

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incomes for

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,

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, human rights are low.

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, economical factors showed

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of the

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because If

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was

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rich

then

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citezens

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citizens

were lived good.

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example

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if you have enough money you tend

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for your wishes,

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as you may

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to

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apply

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traveling

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and you can

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your health. From

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earlier

people

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tend to earn more money,

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furthermore

,

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who lived economical

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developer

developed

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they spent

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their

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money for they want. Nowadays we live in a modern world and

people

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have

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facilities

such

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as humans can

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free anywhere. it means

people

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choose county that their incomes in conclusion, if

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had a chance,

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would have lived in a

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where

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could earn more.

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,

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support

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first

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statement.