Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse. What is your opinion? Support your point of view with relevant examples.

Never before have we seen so many environmental issues in the

last

twenty years. There are many individuals who claim that we should not

use

fossil fuels for our needs,

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we should

use

more eco-friendly resources like wind and solar power.

In contrast

, others argue that oil,gas and coal are crucial for many sectors and if we stop them

this

will have a negative effect on

economy

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. I believe that it is vital to change our traditional

energy

sources to more

environmental

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friendly ones.

To begin

with, I am of the belief that

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crisis will be the major problem in the

next

decades. So, it is important that action be taken in order to alleviate

this

issue.

First

and foremost, changing our sources where we

use

for

energy

will play a pivotal role, but

this

should be

occured

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occurred

without having a negative impact on

economy

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.

For instance

, governments can pass new laws and regulations which will motivate companies and citizens to invest in

clear

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clean

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energy

sources like solar and wind power.

This

will mitigate significantly the CO2

emmisions

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emissions

as they will

use

this

clear

energy

for their operation and needs.

On the other hand

, I think that

this

transition should be

occured

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occurred

in stages and not directly

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because

then

, only big corporations will have the opportunity to follow

this

eco-friendly direction. A clear illustration of

this

could be said to be that in many countries, small and local businesses have

not

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funds to invest in these changes and barely

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by with their own liabilities. So, to these entrepreneurs, governments should give more time and more incentives.

Besides

, multinational companies are the biggest pollutions, so these should change their way of operation. To sum up, I am an advocate of

this

transition and I hope

to

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.

Also

, I think that only through the concerted effort of people in power and companies can

this

problem be eliminated.