A report on the issues of the school’s poor sports facilities

The purpose of

this

report is to suggest how to attract more teenagers to the science museum. In the

first

place

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we need to make more

teeangers

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teenagers

aware of how much interesting stuff they can

larn

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learn

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,

also

having fun. Watching the museum exhibitions can be so much intense. We could create leaflets to attract people to come and visit,

for example

when someone sees a good and

colorfull

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colourful

made leaflets, it attracts their

atention

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attention

. If we don't have

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visitors we should reduce the admissions, so more people are able to afford it. And if we put a special prize it attracts people to come. We could introduce

audio visual

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audiovisual

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exhibits, in

this

way we can get visitors from schools

,

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because children like seeing

this

kind of

exhibits

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and

its

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it's

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interesting for them. To sum it up there are many ways to attract more teenagers to come and visit the museum. If we introduce different exhibits,

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specials and by advertising online, visitors numbers could be dramatically increased.