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the alteration of the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.

The given maps illustrate the alteration of the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005. The general overview here is that there was a noticeable transformation after the construction take place and the different changes can be seen in the addition of extra facilities. According to the maps,it can be seen that in 1990.there was a river running from the north to the south where the sea stood. There were two main roads running from the west to the east, with the bridge across the river.
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, a school,a hospital,a
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 and the
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 station was located to the northeast.the parking lot stood near the
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 station. Situated on the northwest was the lake with the house around it. The number of houses and an apartment was located to the southwest. By 2005, the school, the hospital and the car park remained unaffected. The airport was constructed to the north of the school and the houses to the southeast had gone to may way for a factory. Similar, the house around the lack was replaced by three new apartments.
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,the three apartments and a supermarket are situated where the houses stood .
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, there was an addition of a
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 running to the west, and the ferry pier was built on the sea area to the southeast.

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