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Living In A Country Where You Have To Speak A Foreign Language Can Cause Serious Social And Practical Problems

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The fact is that, when people live in a
country
 where they must to communicate in a foreign
language
, it can cause some social problems, like practical. I agree with
this
 view, but iI
also
 have some thoughts about it. On the one hand, it is obvious that for tourists or migrations living in another
country
 is a challenge. They don`t have any persons that can speak their mother
language
 and as a
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consequence
this
 thing makes their being in the
country
 more difficult. Individuals face various cultural features that are unusual for them.
In addition
, there is a problem with communication,
that is
 a problem too. There is no doubt that for many people thinking and speaking in another
language
 is so difficult especially because someone can have culture shock. Migration is a good example of people that have some psychological problems6 because of their skills in speaking a foreign
language
.
On the other hand
, for the majority like researchers or journalists staying in another
country
 for a long period is an ability to know something new about
this
country
.
Moreover
, it is a possibility to improve speaking skills by foreign
language
 and to find interesting information about culture profile of the
country
.
Furthermore
, nowadays society can use a different type of translater even
in
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 the phone for communication with others. To conclude, I totally agree with the statement, that living in a
country
 where you have to speak by foreign
language
 can affect our social state and can be a reason for many psychological problems. But at the same time, I am sure that staying there is an ability to know some features about the
country
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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