Task 2: Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives. So then it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a waste of time to watch television
news
and read newspapers. Because some Use synonyms
people
believe that Use synonyms
news
has no Use synonyms
connection
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people
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lives
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, I do agree with Linking Words
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statement in Linking Words
this
material I will explain why Linking Words
news
is not connected with individuals Use synonyms
lives
.
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Firstly
, indeed Linking Words
news
has no Use synonyms
connection
with Use synonyms
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lives
anymore because the channels that manage these notices have collusion with the government and even with the mafia. To illustrate, in Brazil we have a Use synonyms
tv
channel that had a great influence on Use synonyms
society
for decades. Where they brought their announcement tailored based on what authorities wanted for them to tell. Today, with the internet the Brazilian Use synonyms
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news
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. Alternatively, personally, if Use synonyms
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approach were different, Linking Words
society
would trust their notice not thinking they were losing their time with fake bulletins.
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In addition
, the majority of the Linking Words
people
who still watch television bulletin programs or even read the latest notices argues that there have more bad notices than a good announcement. Use synonyms
For example
, it is clear that good Linking Words
news
does not get the attention of individuals but bad prest release does, even if they need to show on their Use synonyms
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programs war and death. Use synonyms
Conversely
, in my opinion, if Linking Words
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and newspapers announced more frequently bulletins with a contrast of good information and bad information it would have a better relevance to Use synonyms
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.
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thinking the Use synonyms
news
has no Use synonyms
connection
with their Use synonyms
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even believing it is a waste of time Use synonyms
news
will never change their programs since it is the way they survive. In my opinion, with the implementation of the internet and smartphones with announcements coming without filters from different sources the contrast of the reality is increasing giving a better reality to the Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite