A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. • Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum • Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful • Give details of when you would be available for work

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Smith, I am writing regarding the voluntary job which was advertised on the museum’s website. It has been a while that I am seeking

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a part-time job to spend my time productively, as I am a junior student and cannot apply for a full-time career.

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job is consistent with my interests in history and traditional arts, not having

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is not an all-important matter to me. As I am bilingual and able to speak Spanish and English fluently and most of our hometown’s

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are Spanish, I can effectively communicate with those who visit the museum and guide them around.

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which is financially and culturally beneficial. In terms of work time,

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I have university classes during the weekdays, I can manage to be present at the gallery through the evening shifts. At the weekends, I can be available full-time, if there is

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exam season. I look forward to receiving your answer, Yours sincerely, Dorsa Shekofteh

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Feb 20, 2022

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