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Today our lifestyle is changing rapidly and affects family relationships. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#lifestyle #relationships
In
this
 modern scenario,technology has brought many amenities to us in terms of electronic gadgets and advanced machines,
therefore
 these facilities have altered harmonious
realtionships
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relationships
 among
people
 in either optimistic or pessimistic ways.
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better detail with my subject view. To embark on,nowadays,many individuals tend to operate phones rather than spending
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valuable time with their families,so it will
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 some
demerits
 in many ways.
firstly
,the most significant factor is
communication
 can become weaker among
people
 and sometimes it leads to loose permanent bonding due to some misunderstandings.
secondly
,these days,everyone has become indolent because of the modern facilities
such
 as washing machines and vacuum cleaners.
for instance
,when I was young,there were no
such
 amenities,
thus
people
 were active as they used to work themselves like washing clothes with their hands
instead
 of using machines and
this
 is
also
 one of the exercises to keep the health in a good condition. On another hand,
although
 there are
demerits
 to
this
 trend,there are
also
 benefits.
initially
,
advancement
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 of technology enables many things can be easier in terms of simple transmission through
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mobile phones as well as it furnishes video call facility for all
people
 who are residing far away from their families.
moreover
,we can
also
 update with the latest news with using some apps on the phone like google and way2news.
for example
,In the past ,everyone used to read the newspaper for knowing the information about the outer world.
furthermore
,at that time there were no electronic gadgets,so
people
 used to write letters to their families for
communication
 purpose.not only latest style provides many opportunities but
also
 facilitates
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communication
 through
the
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mobiles. To conclude,every coin has both merits and
demerits
,but the pros are higher than the cons.the benefits in terms of easy
communication
 and instant updates.whereas,
demerits
 are
communication
 limited as well as become idle.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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