Today our lifestyle is changing rapidly and affects family relationships. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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In
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modern scenario,technology has brought many amenities to us in terms of electronic gadgets and advanced machines,
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these facilities have altered harmonious
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relationships
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in either optimistic or pessimistic ways.
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better detail with my subject view. To embark on,nowadays,many individuals tend to operate phones rather than spending
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valuable time with their families,so it will
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some
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in many ways.
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,the most significant factor is
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can become weaker among
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and sometimes it leads to loose permanent bonding due to some misunderstandings.
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,these days,everyone has become indolent because of the modern facilities
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as washing machines and vacuum cleaners.
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,when I was young,there were no
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amenities,
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were active as they used to work themselves like washing clothes with their hands
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of using machines and
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one of the exercises to keep the health in a good condition. On another hand,
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to
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trend,there are
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benefits.
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,
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of technology enables many things can be easier in terms of simple transmission through
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mobile phones as well as it furnishes video call facility for all
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who are residing far away from their families.
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,we can
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update with the latest news with using some apps on the phone like google and way2news.
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,In the past ,everyone used to read the newspaper for knowing the information about the outer world.
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,at that time there were no electronic gadgets,so
people
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used to write letters to their families for
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purpose.not only latest style provides many opportunities but
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communication
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mobiles. To conclude,every coin has both merits and
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,but the pros are higher than the cons.the benefits in terms of easy
communication
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and instant updates.whereas,
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are
communication
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limited as well as become idle.
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