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There are a growing demand for fresh water nowadays and this is becoming a global problem. What are the causes and solutions?

#demand #water
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It is true that many
people
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 in the world want to get clear
water
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 every time and everywhere but it can be lead to a lack to offer clear
water
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. While
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 is a serious problem, it can be solved by the effort of all the world. The main cause of increasing supply of
fresh
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freshwater
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water
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 is that
people
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 do not
use
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water
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 saves and they
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 think that it is able to be given the world anytime. Most
people
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 generally
use
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 it all the time
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 as washing, drinking and making, but they waste lots of
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 of
water
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 during
use
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.
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, they keep running
water
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 on while they do washing or
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 too much
amount
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 to grow their plants that are usually not needed to most
people
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, it just for earning companies' cost.
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, there are solutions to the problem. One of the ways to thoughtless demand for
water
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 is making various laws related to using
water
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 so governments of each country or global organizations have to build the laws.
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, when
people
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use
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 it, they are counting on the
amount
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 of
water
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 and if the
amount
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 is over the set line, they impose the tax on
people
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 who do not follow the rule.
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, the organizations should be campaigns about do not waste
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then
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people
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 realize how the situation is quite serious. To sum up, it is clear that the increasing number of
water
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 is harmful.
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, the issue can be solved by making laws and doing campaigns.
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