Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances for an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account while considering the punishment of the crime. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In Today's world,
crime
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is increasing day by day; some people think that for each and every kind of
crime
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there should be fixed
punishment
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.
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, the opposition insists that before fixing the
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, the situation in which that
crime
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has been committed, and the reason for committing it, should always think about it. I strongly stand with
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, though we will discuss both views.
Firstly
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, some
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are very brutal and the government should not delay in giving punishments.
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, some committed
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like rape, murder, terrorism etc. For these kinds of offences, the government should fix the
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and the police should immediately file the charge sheet and should make sure that the culprit will not be out of bars in any circumstances.
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these types of
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have a deep effect on an individuals mind for a lifetime.
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, there are always some motivations behind these
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. So before giving any
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to any person, we should always take into consideration all the sides of that
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which has been committed.
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, some beggar children are doing a
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by stealing something from people but the reason behind
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some bigger culprits who force those children to do these kinds of acts. So people should always consider the
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side of the coin as well because it will ruin an individual's life. To conclude,
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should not be spared but the reasons and motivations behind that offences should always be taken into consideration and the right criminal should be punished. Government should definitely fix
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but not all types of
crimes
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