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All cars that burn fossil fuel should be banned and electric cars should replace them.Do you agree or disagree.

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It is undeniable that
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 become the major issue to increase carbon emission in the
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, so the legislators should ban oil engine
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 and electric vehicles should take the position of
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. As far as my views are concerned I fully accord with giving statement
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 should be banned for save the environment and promote advanced eco-friendly commuting ways. There are myriads of reasons to support electric
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. The major one is to reduce
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 pollution which causes by
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cars
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. Because vehicles run on clean energy ,not oil. These produce less carbon which is useful to overcome the toxic gases in the atmosphere.
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, electric
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 need less maintenance as compared to mechanical ones. So that the new technology will be pocket friendly.
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, these days more and more people are concerned about saving nature and social organizations and the authorities
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 promote and provide financial support to companies who find alternative of
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. So they improve
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 quality.
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, there are many environmentally friendly ways to charge electric
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 like renewable energy
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 as solar,
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, and hydro. Nowadays, due to the sugar population and the increase in demand for fossil
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 as well as the lack of sources. The price of gas is quite high and inflation
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 merges the rate of
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 every month
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 why masses choose other options.
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, in India in the month of November 2021, the petrol price cross 106 rupees litres. after ,independence
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 is the highest rate notice in the country and still the price 100 rupees per litres it is not a cup of tea of common men in my country. Even people these days make both ends meet for their families. In a nutshell, it reiterated that with advanced technology auto-mobile industry made affordable and eco-friendly travel made in the future and the government should be banned
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 or put some tax to reduce the use of these vehicles so definitely electric
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 replace the older one
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