Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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modern

societies, it become very common to be seen

about

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the

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advertisments

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advertisements

. Some

people

say that advertising

enourges

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encourages

us to buy things that we really do not need, others claim that advertisements

spreads

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the info that new

products

may improve our lives.

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my

perspetive

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perspective

, I agree that the advertising

encourage

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us to buy

stuffs

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kinds of stuff

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but not really need. To start with, The

aims

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of the

advertisment

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advertising

that

people

see almost everywhere, including internet

platform

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platforms

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,busses,

big

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and big

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buildings, is

trying

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to tell individuals that their

products

are the

lastest

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latest

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or the most advanced in their regions.

For instance

, Apple

smart phone

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smartphone

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, the head of the

smart phone

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smartphone

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industry, Apple gave

the

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press conference , and

spreading

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the advertisement in most countries, on TV,billboards,

instant

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apps,resulting

the

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explosure

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exposure

of their newest product with some fancy and cool

function

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functions

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,

such

as high-resolution

camaras

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cameras

,

therefore

,

young

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generation

are

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crazy for it, as they can make extreme nice photos and post to instant apps for sharing with others.

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, the

smart phone's

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basic

function

is never changes

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, for making

call

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and

use

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some applications both

on

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in

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private life and

work

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.

Hence

, I personally agree that

,

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some of the

ads

overweigh their own

products

'

function

for persuading

people

to follow on .

moreover

, there are many similar

products

called healthy manager

watch

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watches

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,

such

as

fitbit

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,

the

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function

is monitoring

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fitness,

and

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sleeping time,etc. the

compaines

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companies

also

invest in

ads

to tell

people

it

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they

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can

promot

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promote

their

lifes

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lives

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by using

it

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them

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.

However

, individuals can

regualrely

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regularly

visit their doctors

and

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make

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have

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body

check

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checks

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and get

much

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professional medical advice.

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,

improving

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they improve

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their own

life style

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lifestyle

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under medical advice without having

this

fitbit

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watch.

To conclude

, There are some advantages of advertising, that can tell

the

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society what's new recently. But I believe the final goal of

ads

is only

expolure

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to expand

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their

products

and increase the selling numbers to boost the company's profit.

People

are buying some

products

by

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due to

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ads

' influence but not really

need

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needed

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.