Some people argue that keeping pets is beneficial for longevity while others believe that household animals are not healthy for people to have as companions. Discuss both sides of the argument and which side you support, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
While it is
thaught
household animals have only positive sides Correct your spelling
thought
other
believe that they can be harmful Fix the agreement mistake
others
for
their health. I Change the preposition
to
convinced
that Add a missing verb
am convinced
this
issue has both sides.
There are a lot of people
who takes care pets
. These Change preposition
of pets
people
strongly believe to
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in
positive
effects to them Correct article usage
the positive
from
their Change preposition
of
pets
. Furthemore
, It was obvious that housekeeping animals could influence Correct your spelling
Furthermore
to
the medium mostly Change preposition
apply
exellent
. Correct your spelling
excellent
For example
, cats, which usually live in our houses, service
like a little Replace the word
serve
creature
that Fix the agreement mistake
creatures
bring
to Change the verb form
brings
house
Add an article
the house
a
calmness, when some of us feel stress. Correct article usage
apply
Additionaly
, Correct your spelling
Additionally
Additional
pets
could be like a little baby for people
who decided to born
. By taking care of Add a missing verb
be born
Add an article
an animal
animal
they could Fix the agreement mistake
animals
taught
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be taught
to
simple Change preposition
apply
parent's
duties. Fix the agreement mistake
parents'
For instance
, my close relatives are going to get a baby but before getting pregnant they bought a little dog. They said that having a baby is a huge responsibility so they decided to start with Add an article
the dog
a dog
dog
to check out their abilities.
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dogs
However
, meanwhile keeping in our house pets
made us to
restrict our wishes. Change the verb form
apply
For example
, If you want to go abrod
you Correct your spelling
abroad
couldnt
leave your house for a long time. Correct your spelling
couldn't
Moreover
, people
who have household animals have to provide them everything
they need, including food, drugs, Change preposition
with everything
Correct your spelling
necessary
necessery
place to sleep and so on. Correct article usage
a necessery
Addiotionaly
, providing Correct your spelling
Additionally
pets
extremelly
expensive pleasure for most Correct your spelling
extremely
people
and it demands great abilities to have them. For example
, I have my own cat with its all demandings
. It often Correct your spelling
demanding
create
Change the verb form
creates
a
noise and havoc in my flat.
To conclude who takes care Remove the article
apply
after
Change preposition
of
pets
has a huge responsibility to provide them everything
. Change preposition
with everything
Add an article
The decision
Decision related
living with Add a hyphen
Decision-related
pets
depends only person who really want
it.Change the verb form
wants
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
