"Write a letter to your neighbour to ask him/her to take care of your house while you are away for a week on holiday. Please say •Explain where you are going and why. • What do you need him/her to do? • What should he/she do in case of emergency?"

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letter to ask you for help to take care of my house as I am not here for coming one week on my holidays. I am going to my Aunty's house in Chicago because I have a three days seminar near her building. So I will spend my off days with her as she invited me so many times to stay with her. Please look at my house. I will close all the doors and windows and the front gate too. I will give you my keys and please keep them with you.

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, please take care to switch on the light of Sit out during night time and please look at my dog for a while and provide him

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foods and I am sure he will not make problems as he already knows you.

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, please drop some water in my garden on alternative days as you can

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it will damage when I will come back.

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, if you face any emergency, please contact me immediately and I will arrange my friend in case I am not able to come. I hope that you can manage

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for me and I will come back soon. Thank you in advance. Regards, Elena Thomas

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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212 words

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