Some people believe that after hundred years life will be easier for most of people, while the others are unsure. What is your opinion?

Some people think that after a few

centuries

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the life of humans will have fewer struggles in comparison to the current era

however

, others argue that they are not sure about the future. In my opinion, compared to the past few centuries we can expect that life will be easier and cheaper in the future

due to

the growth of technology and transportation.

To begin

with, advancement in the field of technology will surely make the

life

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lives

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of communities more successful in the coming years. Developers are developing

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software called robotics which is capable of doing most of the human work in a fraction of

time

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the time

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without making any mistakes,

hence

saving much more time to do other productive work.

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, one of the top market-leading companies has introduced software robots to do the task of common

problem solving

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and replying to the customer chat

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employees to focus on the other improvement. Transportation is far better than now it was a few decades ago. There is a drastic decline in the travelling and shipment time because of superfast trains, metros and direct connecting flights which makes today's lives more comfortable and cost-effective. Entrepreneurs are utilizing these modes of transport to ship their products to the customer as fast as they can.

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, a popular e-commerce enterprise called Amazone delivers the products in one day to

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prime customers.

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a prominent outcome

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that one of the most tremendous problems

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history has been eliminated. In conclusion, lives in the future of hundreds of years later will be absolutely easier and

this

can be evidenced by the experiences that we humans have in terms of technology and transportation.

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coherence cohesion

Clear and coherent introduction and conclusion

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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