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Many people living in cities these days do not get enough physical exercise. What are the causes of this? How to tackle the problem?

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There is a high number of individuals living in
cities
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 nowadays who do not get enough physical exercise. In
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 as well as what are the solutions to improve
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 problem.
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 and foremost, the causes of the
people
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 who live in
cities
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 not getting enough body exercise
is
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 due to many problems.
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, there are many examples of
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such
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 as busy life, having to work and study at the same time with no life balance at all. To illustrate, in Sao Paulo the individuals who live far from the centres need to get train and buses to go to their jobs which takes four to five hours,
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 work for eight hours and do the same path again to go back to their homes.
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, if they lived close to their jobs, they would have more time to exercise and do activities.
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, to ,tackle the problem of
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 who live in
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 improving their lives and
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 more physical activities the
government
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 should intervene to bring more awareness for its
people
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.
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, in , the Netherlands the
government
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 do its best for
people
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 to use bicycle
instead
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 of using public transport. With the implementation of bicycle roads as well as the help of companies who buy bikes to their employees to aware them to do more physical movement.
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, if the
government
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 do not help society who live in
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 to do more physical movement, it will be hard for them to start by themselves these activities. In conclusion,
although
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 there are notorious problems in regards to
people
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 not doing physical exercises the solution is in the
government
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's hands. In my opinion, without the help of the local ,authorities it will be hard for the
people
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 to awake and suddenly start working out.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary lifestyles
  • desk-bound jobs
  • fast-paced urban life
  • conveniences
  • physical exertion
  • barrier
  • densely populated
  • pollution
  • safety concerns
  • urban planning
  • pedestrian areas
  • cycle lanes
  • accessible
  • workplace wellness programs
  • subsidize
  • financial barriers
  • public awareness
  • incorporate
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