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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

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Information
technology
 is growing
up
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so fast that it has made our life and work very convenient. And, I believe,
this
 change has immensely helped mankind to evolve over time. The analysis contained in the following paragraphs will explore the positives and negatives surrounding the use of
technology
 in human life. On the one hand, has had a huge impact on data transmission. The most important strength of
technology
 is that it has helped
people
 to communicate with others instantly.
For instance
, a few decades ago the only way to communicate with persons who were far away was through postal letters. Later it became easier as one could talk over the phone. Now, folks communicate over the internet.
This
 can help
people
 who stay away from their families for their education or work.
In addition
 to that,
people
 promote their business in any country on the world side,
for example
, with the aid of the e-commerce website Amazon, citizens sell or purchase any kind of product anytime.
On the other hand
, there are a few drawbacks like security breaches and their impact on children. There are many instances where
people
 lose their financial data after paying online using credit cards. And one more weakness is that
technology
 is making a huge impact on teenagers as they are getting addicted to it. They are trying to spend most of their free time on phones
instead
 of playing outdoors, and it affects their health. In conclusion, there are more benefits to using information
technology
 than drawbacks as discussed above if everyone uses it in the proper way.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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