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Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In
this
 modern world, there are things which develop and diversify the needs and whats of
people
.
This
 essay will elicit why
people
 engage themselves in extreme sports and activities risking their own lives just to be in trend. The possible atrocious side of
people
 engaging with
this
 type of activity
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 because of the modern famous term of YOLO or you only live once. Normally young generations today are much fierce and dare-devil on kinds of stuff they want to
experience
. Living with the thread is almost the number one focus of
people
 nowadays. As peer pressure and social media influence can greatly push
people
 to do
this
 as most
people
 want something they can post and boast about on social media platforms. Another is the common persona of
people
 to be risk-takers. As a common saying,
people
 often do not forecast two major things, accident, and death.
Hence
 when
people
 what to
experience
 the thrill, they often forget the counterpart of it. They often forgot the rules, consequences, and aftermath of things, they want to
experience
 and will do to others. During the
experience
, they forget to be vigilant and persistent in taking control, as it will come with great
experience
, practice, and determination. One good example of
this
 is scuba diving in areas where you are not well experienced with the trail because it is famous in that area or diving spot. We are not judging their choices
however
 if they engaged in careful planning and training, accidents and death could be greatly prevented. All in all, it boils down to the person's perspective of what danger is. At the end of the day, our choices and decisions will always have a counter reactive
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of future lives.
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