Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure.What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest?

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now do part-time jobs while they are still learning at university.

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tendency may lead to negative effects, the number of young people who sacrifice

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for

work

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is growing nowadays. I believe

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problem has certain causes and can be solved by taking special measures. Apparently that most of the

students

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who

work

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have some financial

expenses

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to meet. One common cause is the high cost of

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. As many colleges set high tuition fees, some parents cannot fully afford higher

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for their children.

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, these

students

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have to

work

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to pay their university fees. The other cause is living

expenses

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. Many

students

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study away from their hometown and have to pay for accommodation, food, entertainment etc, as it is often hard to cover all of these

expenses

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,

students

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are forced to earn money to afford their living. I think that the common issue of

students

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working during their studies comes with the result

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lower quality of

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. I can suggest two possible solutions to

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problem.

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, the government could make the

education

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fee is free with some requirements.

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,

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result can be achieved by financing educational establishments from the country's budget ,especially for

students

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who come from

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.

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, some organisations can provide opportunities for flexible hours,

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, helping individuals to manage both studies and earn a living without impacting their quality of learning and mental well-being. In conclusion, I believe that mainly of lack of financial resources forces the

students

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to

work

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, but

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issue can be solved by seeking various ways to cover the

expenses

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fully or partially with help from the government and

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working for firms that provide alternate options.